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Dec 27, 2020
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Postphone...
Friday December 11th 19:23 hrs.
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"We got your Christmas card today
just wanted to thank you and wish you a Merry Christmas
Call me when you get the chance."
Tuesday December 15th 09:00 hrs.
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"Damn! He should check his phone."
Saturday December 19th 11:17 hrs.
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"Maybe the step-son took his phone again and is back in jail."
Wedensday December 23d 09:15 hrs.
The subscrib...
"I hope that there is nothing wrong
that he's not back in the hospital.
Surely, Paulette would call us"
Friday December 25th 08:31 hrs.
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Friday December 25th 08:33 hrs.
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If you feel...
I am afraid for you, please call me.
Funny how we are tempted to pray to a god we deny
for the sake of another. But here I am; wondering if
it will make a difference. Or did it make a difference already?
Have you decided; that since I didn't need you before
You don't have to answer my prayer?
About This Poem
Last Few Words: Sunday December 27th 15:15 hrs. Still no word from my best friend, "my brother from another mother."
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Direction:
What did you think of my title?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - draft
Comments
Lavender
4 years 6 months ago
Hi, Geezer,
Keep on praying! I'll say a prayer or two, also!
L
Geezer
4 years 6 months ago
Thank you ...
I appreciate it. ~ Geez.
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lovedly
4 years 6 months ago
niceee phoneeyyy poemy
From the holey Gee
---tree only
could b
fone me
where's my present
presently
Geezer
4 years 6 months ago
My friend...
is just ten years older than me, but has had a couple of heart attacks and infections. He has been bed-ridden for the last 4-5 years. We are as close as brothers. I am sending snail-mail this morning. Here's hoping that it's nothing. Thank you all for your concern; I will keep you all informed. I can feel all those virtual hugs, thank you. ~ Geez.
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