Words of Passion

Bless the letters and praise the words,
Passion to mourn the human pains,
Birds that flatter, flowers that daze,
Bless the letters, and praise the words.

Bless the letters and praise the words,
Pendants adorn the human strains,
Jewels that matter, gems to blaze,
Bless the letters and praise the words.

About This Poem

Last Few Words: Do you think that the title works for the piece?

Style/Type: Structured: Western

Review Request Direction: What did you think of my title?
How was my language use?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Is the internal logic consistent?

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Jordan, JOR

Favorite Poets: I favor the ones who are closer to humanity and , Poets are humanity when the world lose it.

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Comments

Rula

4 years 6 months ago

Wow Teddy

This was really quick. I'm thankful to be here with such great friends.
Please feel free to suggest anything to improve this piece
It will be appreciate it my dear friend.

Asche Keegan

4 years 6 months ago

Hello Rula,

I love your poem, particularly the repetition of "Bless the letters and praise the words."

I like your structure quite a bit, although if you had your third line rhyme internally as your seventh line did, I think it could help that a bit. Other than that, happy new year, and it's nice to meet you!

Rula

4 years 6 months ago

Hello Asche Keegan

Always great to see new friends reading my humble poetry. You suggestion is spot on and always welcomed. Looking into it.
Highly appreciate it.

Rula

4 years 6 months ago

Hello sir Alan J.

I really cant thank you enough for your accomplished and thoughtful constructive feedback.
I can't but appreciate each and every suggestion you've presented to improve this little piece.
I shall certainly look into them and take them into consideration.
Soon
Highly appreciate it... Always

Rula

4 years 6 months ago

Can't

thank you enough sir Alan S. Jeeves.
Editted as suggested.

Ray Whitaker

4 years 6 months ago

So short, so good...

Really liked this one, succinct and says so much.

Rula

4 years 6 months ago

Hello R.W

First time to meet so I want to say to welcome to neopoet and and welcome to my page. Getting such a kind comment from a published poet means a lot.
Thank you so much.