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Jan 03, 2021
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Today is here
Today is here for me and you
Its up to us, what will we do
Be happy and free
Just like me
Yesterday is gone and matters no more
Today is fresh and offers new
So don't just sit, and think about you
Cause the day will be over
And replaced with new
Chances to take
Choices are made
Decisions sometimes hard
Results not always good
But no one ever said that they ever would
Open new doors
Let new adventures begin
Get happy and fit
And go to the gym
Enjoy your life
Cause its all you have
Expand it, love it, live it
Be happy within
Your life never came with a book
But look what you've done
You gave yourself a new look
And that is better than any book...
L.Mcdougald
About This Poem
Last Few Words: Sometime i write about real life experiences other just from random thoughts, words or events
Review Request Direction:
What did you think of my title?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Review Request Intensity: Please use care (this is a sensitive subject for me, do not critique harshly)
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
c lynn brooks
4 years 5 months ago
Memuckit
a warm Neo Poet welcome to you good advice try something new ,look ahead not behind
keep writing
lovedly
4 years 5 months ago
All I say
have a good day
yesterday I'd said
have a good day
and
tomorrow when it comes
as a today
hear me say
have a good day
and
yes like always
a good day
if you may