Loop Poetry

I always wanted to write a sonnet
Sonnet of every poet
Poet that has a trustful pen
Pen that speaks of all Men
Men who care for true emotions
Emotions that make the difference
Difference that makes us humans

My sonnet bloomed a fruitful tree
Tree that later called Poetry
Poetry of every color
Colors that paint with hope
Hope that paints almost everything
Everything that touches humans.

About This Poem

Last Few Words: Just wanted to try my hand at another form of poetry. Hope you enjoy it.

Style/Type: Structured: Western

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Jordan, JOR

Favorite Poets: I favor the ones who are closer to humanity and , Poets are humanity when the world lose it.

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Comments

lovedly

4 years 6 months ago

you may start with me

Gee has started the theme
may see his
on my poem
Rula
ma'am

Lavender

4 years 6 months ago

Loop Poetry

Hello, Rula!
Very clever form and wonderful theme and language. I wonder...is it necessary to include "a" and "the" at the beginning of the sentences? It seems this particular form would forgive that formality. I very much like this, and appreciate learning about it. May give it a shot myself, soon!
Thank you, Rula!
L

Rula

4 years 6 months ago

Thank you dear Lavender

You are totally right. Done as suggested.
How do you like the addition.
A very fun form. You can infinitely play with it.
Appreciate your priceless visit dear.

Lavender

4 years 6 months ago

Oh, Rula!

This is wonderful!
L

lovedly

4 years 6 months ago

Revised after Lave silently advised

I always wanted to write a sonnet,
sonnet of every poet,
poet x(that)x who has a trustful pen,
pen that speaks of all {the}x men,
men who care for true emotions,
emotions that make the difference,
difference that makes us humans.

just imagine