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lovedly
lovedly
Jan 29, 2021 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)
This poem is part of the contest:

Out At Sea

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Sea of Beauty (Jan Contest)

Sea of beauty
lies only in some azure eyes
I 'm a cynosure of all eyes
love in my eyes
alone does lie

I never cry
lose or win
bear abuse

my eyes shed a tear
to wash off the glue
I call
Narcissism

call it what ever may you
I have azure eyes so blue
come and see me
if you wish to

About This Poem

Last Few Words: Eyes are the only mirrors of truth

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read , and they inspire..

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Comments

Lavender

Lavender

4 years 5 months ago

Sea of Beauty

Hi, Lovedly,
My interpretation of your poem is that it is the sea speaking - the center of attention for all eyes. Such an intriguing poem - leaves me wanting to know more about the third stanza - "...the glue I call Narcissism."
Thank you!
L

lovedly

lovedly

4 years 5 months ago

just google narcissism

glue you know
fluid though
sticks deep into
egoists bones
and
synapses of mind
denude
and in the admixture the fixer
who always thinks every move is a sixer
lol now
lav

lovedly

lovedly

4 years 5 months ago

Thanks Ray

for your review
sad narcissists are unaware
they get dissolved in glue
you know.
in the sea or river water
they drown appreciating their own reflection
amen

lovedly

lovedly

4 years 5 months ago

yes Gee

I miss jess and thee
happy we will be at sea
lol
tc

lovedly

lovedly

4 years 4 months ago

Thanks 15

A good return '
may you get employed by a
Ships Captain
lol

ember

ember

4 years 4 months ago

amazing!!

this poem is for sure gonna be in my head for the rest of the day

lovedly

lovedly

4 years 4 months ago

Thanks

I've read and commented on yours
GO OUT INTO
the wilderness
alone you may be
all by yourself
but never lonely
nature will accompany

ember

ember

4 years 4 months ago

thank you

thank you for your response, it made me smile :-)

Rula

Rula

4 years 4 months ago

Lovedly

So many good lines here. I wish you'd trim some lines for a more profound poem.
Good one.