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Titty-Bear and Cotton-Candy Heart...

On nights when you are asleep
And I can't close my eyes
I lie there thinking and I weep
Because I am not so wise

I can't tell how much I love you
There are no words to say
I'm so grateful you said "I do"
I'll love you everyday

On my chest is a Titty-Bear
Close to my beating heart
I had them put it there
And then I had it start

Heart full of cotton-candy
Sweet as any rhyme
Heart of cotton-candy is just dandy
Keeping time with mine

About This Poem

Last Few Words: For my wife on Valentine's Day

Style/Type: Structured: Western

Review Request Direction: What did you think of my title?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Not actively editing

About the Author

Region, Country: New York State - USA, USA

Favorite Poets: Poe, Emily Dickenson, Robert Frost, Shakespeare, and many of the poets here at Neopoet.

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Geezer

Geezer

4 years 5 months ago

Had to say it...

for the rhyme and because I'm not so wise as to be able to tell her how much I love her. ~ Geez.
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Geezer

Geezer

4 years 5 months ago

Thank you Teddy...

I know that you feel this and understand what it is to love so much. ~ Geez.
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Geezer

Geezer

4 years 5 months ago

No, Thank you!...

You ladies are among my biggest fans and I am always glad to hear what you have to say. [It's always good!] I am almost ashamed of your praise, [at least bashful, I blush when I read your comments!] Thank you all, for being so supportive. Yes, I love my wife very much and I am glad that it shows. ~ Geez.
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