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Night Passing Into OBLIVION

Tonight
Goodnight
tomorrow
as it comes
as a new bride
today
then say
Hello Honey
as the sun
does once rise
at morning twilight
call it dawn

my Dawn
hope
she has been
reborn
on this new
cold sprung morn

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read , and they inspire..

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lovedly

lovedly

4 years 4 months ago

now

it has become last night
none wished it