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Beautiful Butterflies
Well I read it now
your poem O wow
I was all along wondering
butterflies have life
not more than a week
how could they fly
from North of Canada
and return also
butterflies yes
but you clarified
many died
so how did so many reach
Mexico
I still wonder
but after the winters
you have clarified
on their return journey
none ever returned
only produced kid butterflies
which en route died
seven generations ~one per week
so the original ones
never did ever reach
~that is how over millions of years
we humans also did finally screech
bacteria~virus
then as of now genes
~ males and females
Y~X ~~ X~X
in varying man and woman genes
father to son~ to grand one~ then greater grandson
~one must have one,
ELSE NO FURTHER
generation
a son male sperm ~Y~
vertical transmission of sperms~ thirty years one generation
so has nature expanded too~ to a hundred years
with newer vaccination~ may be back to shorter
quicker generations
~and all over as butterflies
once again become--- human
Beautiful Butterflies
that is how nature plays fun
yes it's a pun
and we still after one single one
for ages run
again ~take it as a fresh pun
just for a never ending fun
fire your gun
no amen
About This Poem
Last Few Words: This is a theory of transmigration of butterflies birds and bees from North Canada to Mexico where in winter they all for survival go
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
c lynn brooks
4 years 3 months ago
lovedly
All you speak of in your poem is true. You must have done extensive research
lovedly
4 years 3 months ago
yes ofcourse
it took a long time for someone like you
to peep in and explore I am a scientist since birth
and poet being jobless
lol
thanks for your diction
we must share knowledge Lynn
which you and Gee do