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Kailashana2
14 years 7 months ago
he molts poems
he molts poems
she understands
why
~A
brittle light
14 years 7 months ago
yes! slough the slight ones,
yes! slough the slight ones, and hopefully, a new batch will sprout with more vigor, vitality, and heart!
Race_9togo
14 years 7 months ago
Brittle
This is excellent, so much packed into so litte, with so much feeling.
"a'top" needs no apostraphe
But who cares; this is wonderful.
brittle light
14 years 7 months ago
Jim
thanks. I haven't been around much for a couple of months (on Neopoet). I ran out of anything to say.
still not sure if I can come up with anything worth saying, let alone saying it well...but I suppose I'll keep returning and hope. (though I do like this little piece a lot ). Your input is always very encouraging. thanks again