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Mar 21, 2021
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Let Your Heart Beat
Let your heart beat
as long as it does as its assignment
yes we have only one life to live
let's live
a life happily
as young age is one full of passion
be positive let your mind dictate
the waves of happiness
that both mind and heart need to take
both are totally independent
have intellectual 'minds' of their own
brain only depends for blood
the heart pumps
and the heart pumps
till permits the sun
so don't from life run
we come here but once
have a heart o son
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Geezer
4 years 4 months ago
In your...
usual convoluted style, you have hit the mark. ~ Geez.
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lovedly
4 years 4 months ago
convoluted style, you have hit the mark which good or bad Gee
intricate.
labyrinthine.
perplexing.
puzzling.
tangled.
tortuous.
elaborate.
involved.
Geezer
4 years 3 months ago
All...
of the above, but good! LoL
~ Geez.
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lovedly
4 years 3 months ago
thankness
lol Gee l
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