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Mar 28, 2021
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Dull Sunday
Let me leave
the world today
twill neopoets '
activate
but
don't take me me seriously
I am just lazy
with a mind hazy
all asleep
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Gracy
4 years 3 months ago
Hi Lovedly, I feel rather
Hi Lovedly, I feel rather like that myself. Sort of apathetic. You've expressed it all in a few lines.
Best wishes and may you become energetic soon...lol.
Gracy
lovedly
4 years 3 months ago
Thanks Gracy ma'am
when life ebbs
at the corner stone of time
where then is left
any reason to rhyme
Sunday has gone
as the night
let's once again rise
at the new dawn
wherein lies the surprise
for all remaining future's morn
Seren
4 years 3 months ago
G'day Hon ltns
OK I'm here to kick your butt. Stop trying to get attention and write poetry. I've just commented on a wonderful poem you wrote a while back. Sweets we all know you are capable. If you write a POEM not a plea for attention I will comment on it. And make suggestions if they are warranted.
Hugs and love.
P.s. I'm so glad you're still here <3
lovedly
4 years 3 months ago
Serendipity
you are my new JESS
Kick me hard so that I fly beyond the sky
and now you also know why
Today is a sunny day
Compose a poem i may//// lol
Thanks for being my mentor
I have a lot to learn yet