IN HOPES

I post
and
they all say
nothing about my post
why delay reading

Some message
E G O I S T
meaning ye go
is it

silly be narcissists
I feel
In neo
have we become so
tell me
Q U I C K L Y
I will vanish...
82 I Be

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read , and they inspire..

Comments

Geezer

4 years 3 months ago

When you're...

full of yourself and the wind has blown the leaves of self-doubt from your path, you can always find your way back to the yellow brick road. Look behind the curtain and you will find the little man manipulating the gears and levers, to make himself important. The Great and wonderful Oz! Just remember that you can't always please everyone all the time and you don't always get want you want. You're making much ado about nothing! ~ Geez.
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lovedly

4 years 3 months ago

You're making much ado about nothing! ~ Geez.

then
read my@ 82 for something something
hidden from within
just passing time
geeezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
life else becomes boring
u said be egoist
i am narcissistic
u knoe tis it

Geezer

4 years 3 months ago

I don't see anything...

to change my mind; The dictionary says: Egoist, Narcissist, full of self-importance. ~ Geez.
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