Loneliness Warms

So many run to see
how loneliness is really
enjoyed by some
you are not alone
just one

let the sands
in the desert make you feel
like an oasis
when poets- like shall come
awaken their inner emotions
with your magnetic vibrations

all said and done
cliche number one
in my this only poem

we all are like camels
in a lonely desert
not only you
we are in addition

times' loneliness bells
in windy dry sandy wells
(desert)
not alone
with musicians
me and you
not only you
so many following you
me too

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AND GEES CONTRIBUTION MY FRIEND IS GEEEEEE
rides again, on camel-back!

Sands of the desert blow dry and hot
Dunes of dust, choke my throat
A castle of sand for a king
A drawbridge crosses an empty moat. ~ Geez.

BOWS LOADS OF THANKS

About This Poem

Last Few Words: DESERTS BELLS SANDY TOLL LONG DISTANCE..... FOR JUST anyone come along more the merrier

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read , and they inspire..

Comments

Lavender

4 years 3 months ago

Loneliness Warms

Hello, Lovedly,
I don't really get a lonely feeling here - more of a contentment with being alone. I like the idea of the musicians and the bells in the desert. You have a lot of imagery in this piece - I can almost see the camel prints in the sand as they move along.
Thank you!
L