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Spring is calling

At the death of dawn
flourishes the
fawning fragrance
of the flowers.
Beckoning the
bashful birds of blue
to flutter and fly
letting their white
wings ski across the
soft sapphire lit sky .
Then the world lifts
It’s scintillant
honeysuckle eye
watching the soft
silken clouds sail
on by .

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Region, Country: Virginia, USA

Favorite Poets: Edgar Allan Poe homer Dante Alighieri Oscar Wilde , William Wordsworth

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c lynn brooks

4 years 3 months ago

Edward

I see some use of alliteration being used. Your poem reads very spring like nice airy and sweet

Edward nigma

Edward nigma

4 years 3 months ago

Thank you

Thank you for your wonderful and incisive criticism and comments