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Apr 21, 2021
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Morning Concerto
Fields of green,
Buds of colour,
Swaying beneath,
The rosy horizon,
Of the mornings,
Great show.
Gently bees and birds,
Seemed to awake,
By morning glow,
Calling breakfast,
To loved ones,
They know.
Peacefully they flutter,
To each open bud,
Almost smelling,
The perfumed stew,
Awaking their senses.
Birds and crickets,
Sing their,
Merry little tune,
Like a mob flash,
In the square.
Bravo comes,
From the wings and paws,
Of bugs and mice,
When nature sings.
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
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Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft
Comments
Ray Whitaker
4 years 2 months ago
Nice piece
Good stanzas two 6 lines, 2 five lines, one last a four liner. Great use of white space, IMHO.
c lynn brooks
4 years 2 months ago
beautiful
I was able to picture it all through your words. There is a peaceful,tranquility present in this poem. Keep up the writing