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May 02, 2021
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The Absence of Reality
I've tasted the fruit Of the vine
and its bittersweet reality
when hearts do intertwine
into where they should not be
there is nothing so exciting as
a fleeting thought of you.
alone in the night, I whisper your name
yet knowing it will never be true
I still hope for that which isn't mine
and a charmed life with you.
About This Poem
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Candlewitch
4 years 1 month ago
hey Chrys,
thanks for doing a co-write with me. your contribution was excellent!
*hugs, Cat
c lynn brooks
4 years 1 month ago
Cat
Thank you I love co writing with you