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May 16, 2021
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alone
Represent it cause you’re in it,
don’t you love the way life lies?
Deep in the despair, rise in originality,
there dwells loneliness, it's embellished.
About This Poem
Last Few Words: dont have any
Review Request Direction:
How was my language use?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Is the internal logic consistent?
Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Geezer
4 years 2 months ago
There are so many...
ways that this can be taken. The only thing that I would change is the word [rise] I would use [risen]. ~ Geez.
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