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Jun 09, 2021
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die
The memories have not yet passed
away, into an area I’ll forget. Awaiting
a time I feel fine, awaiting, always
waiting. Conscious that is no right
way to live. I’ll die anyway.
About This Poem
Last Few Words: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=x-U7ZAk_Ky4&t=4s
Review Request Direction: How was my language use?
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
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