Spring reminder (spring Haiku contest)

As spring takes over
breaking the hold of winter
the south dreads summer

About This Poem

Style/Type: Structured: Eastern

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: South Carolina, United States, USA

Favorite Poets: Frost, Burns, Longfellow, Poe, and Johnson. I guess you've noticed these are all past masters. Other than folks on site I don't read any contemporary poets .

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Comments

Lavender

3 years 12 months ago

Spring Reminder

Hello, Stan,
I love the active movement here - very continuous and fluid. I can feel the summer heat and humidity!
Thank you!
L

scribbler

3 years 12 months ago

Yep

Here in the deep south we can hardly enjoy spring because we know that the oppressive heat of summer comes next lol. Thanks for the visit

Geezer

3 years 12 months ago

Nice ...

I'm sure that it's true!
~ Geez.
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scribbler

3 years 12 months ago

I read once that one can tell if a person is from the north or south by asking whether they like spring or autumn best. Those from the south prefer autumn because it means the end of summer and those from the north prefer spring because it's the end of winter