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Jun 29, 2021
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Protecting the ones who hurt me
You don’t know how much pain you have caused me
You said I had man arms, you asked me if I was a large, you said mom would fit in my pants, you called me mean and a bitch, the person I used to call my favorite who I couldn’t live without who I looked up to you hurt me ,and I wish I could tell you but I love you too much
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Geezer
4 years 10 months ago
I'm not sure...
that I understand the way this is written.
Is it meant to be a cry for help?
Is that the reason for it being all one
run-on sentence? A cry of desperation?
You did get my attention. ~ Geezer.
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|Triskelion
4 years 10 months ago
Your
last words show why you should be happy with who you are. People can be cruel, but hopefully they eventually find remorse in their transgressions and apologize I hope it is so in your case.
Thomas
|emma iq
4 years 9 months ago
The narrative
Thank you, Thomas
Some I would have thought that’s where the conflict lies but maybe it’s the solution