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Jul 20, 2021
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Wait till you can fly sky high
Beauty you describe
is like tomorrows volcano
many guys would try to fly along with her
such magnificence one ought to know
you describe in your own words so lovely
violin music I can imagine
like Beethoven
I have no ears
But by the grace
of Almighty
none has ever seen
I too can visualize upon your
you tube screen
lovely as one could be
She
About This Poem
Last Few Words: A poem within a poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Triskelion
3 years 11 months ago
Seriously..
are you writing about Ivanka Trump? This is one thing I enjoy about your writing...it is vague, but much to the point...looking for more, lovedly
Thomas
lovedly
3 years 11 months ago
no I READ any poem ....anyones
my brain waves jump and my synapses plead
post a poem
please I do
Geezer
3 years 11 months ago
I guess...
the lure of your works, is the vagueness; so that one can insert their own vision of what it is about. I must try to remember that! ~ Geez.
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lovedly
3 years 11 months ago
Thanks Gee
A poem must have as many interpretations
as many read
what else is poetry
tell me please
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