My Flowery Youth...(Edited by Gee)

Youth is a fountain
which must one day dry
Within our aging skin
and beneath balding hair
our hearts can remain youthful

In our aged dreams
we can water youthful hearts
the youngster still remains
and needs only memories to feed on
Pause; a comma, is not a coma
if our lonely hearts are still strong

Oh youth, do not flee
be free, be free
Take me, take me

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read , and they inspire..

Comments

Geezer

3 years 12 months ago

My take on this one...

Youth is a fountain
which must one day dry
Within our aging skin
and beneath balding hair
our hearts can remain youthful

There is more, but I leave it to you to figure it out.

The rest:

In our aged dreams
we can water youthful hearts
the youngster still remains
and needs only memories to feed on
Pause; a comma, is not a coma
if our lonely hearts are still strong

Oh youth, do not flee
be free, be free
Take me, take me

~ Geez.
.

lovedly

3 years 12 months ago

Gee

That's nice thanks
sos
kindly d the rest my old poem
'twas

lovedly

3 years 12 months ago

just excellent now Gee AND HERE TIS CHEERS TO NEOS

in your youth you would have been heartthrob of many lol you are free Geeeeee

Youth is a fountain
which must one day dry
Within our aging skin
and beneath balding hair
our hearts can remain youthful

In our aged dreams
we can water youthful hearts
the youngster still remains
and needs only memories to feed on
Pause; a comma, is not a coma
if our lonely hearts are still strong

Oh youth, do not flee
be free, be free
Take me, take me

~ Geez.