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The Swan Dance
A walk around The Irish Garden
the swans dance with excitement
two swans noisily ran near
and stood before me.
The 1-mile walk took 35 minutes
I took pictures with my iPhone
the photographer in me leaps
I capture the scenes that inspired me.
The couple embraced each other quietly on a bench
a family watched the lake sparkle in the sunlight
the cutest child excitedly yells, OMG
it's like her parents were following me.
I love seeing the swans
I take their pictures every time I come
a black swan audibly flaps her wings
to my delight, as I began to film.
I achieve an hour of yoga and meditation every morn
I walk the occasional walk to strengthen my legs
my apple watch tapped my arm
I completed the 1-mile walk.
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Comments
Geezer
3 years 10 months ago
Hmmm...
I am impressed! A mile walk around the park every day? An hour of meditation each morning? Yoga? I'm lucky that I can twist myself up out of my chair, let alone into some yoga. I love the part about taking the pictures. Maybe I can manage that!
~ Geez.
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Barbara Writes
3 years 10 months ago
Thanks, Geez
Glad you like it. I lay in bed and meditate yoga every morning bf getting up. I walk a mile when I can not everyday. Lol.
Geezer
3 years 10 months ago
I do...
a couple of miles, just doing the shopping with my wife. But I only go inside and do that once in a while, when it is too hot to just sit in the car. Lol . Still impressed! ~ Geez.
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scribbler
3 years 10 months ago
Lay in bed doing my yoga.....Now THAT's my kind of yoga.
And now you inspire me to walk more to rebuild my once strong legs.
Barbara Writes
3 years 10 months ago
hi
thanks for reading glad you enjoyed it