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Aug 02, 2021
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Best Friends Animals or HUMAN
I just struggled to go on a walk
doc says before you die
gain your stamina
LOL
I passed by an extremely fair skinned couple
they looked away to the other side
even though I'm not black.
I was struggling
pulling/dragging my legs slowly
The three dogs left them and came to me
and licked my feet
They sighed couldn't speak
I smiled and patted them
they licked my palms
The couple was amazed
but felt no shame
as their dogs had replaced them
Who is more human
can you spell it out to me
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Triskelion
3 years 11 months ago
...being human
...I sometimes wish people were more like dogs. The world might be a better place.
.hm..on second thought, are you sure they weren't just tasting you to see if you'd make a good meal?
Thomas
lovedly
3 years 11 months ago
ha ha haaaaaaa
I like humour
Geezer
3 years 11 months ago
I'll bet...
that was it, they were taking a lesson from watching Shark Week, using their mouth to taste you to see if you were edible!
Is he sweet enough? ~ Geez.
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lovedly
3 years 11 months ago
Ha ha ha
taste me if you can
poetryman
tyro
3 years 11 months ago
Humans are too quick to judge
Humans are too quick to judge, they cannot feel a stranger's heart; dogs can.
lovedly
3 years 11 months ago
thank you
tyro
Triskelion
3 years 11 months ago
Agreed
Dogs are on a completely different level when it comes to sensitivity. They can be Wonderful creatures.
Thomas
lovedly
3 years 11 months ago
ok
some times I feel I'd have been a better puppy