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Aug 12, 2021
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Your Smile is Intoxicating
Your smile is exotic
it's intoxicating
it sends swift currents
down my bent spine
straightens many a thing
which at my age become
sans
Still I love to watch our smile
so very fragile
it's wild and n the forests of darkness
where there is no sun
your blushes ignite the dried up leaves
autumn is coming
I can see
will you smile with me
rather more smile
will ye
blush~ blush I can see
waters trickling
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Triskelion
3 years 11 months ago
That's more like
the metaphor master I think of when I see the name lovedly.
Thomas
lovedly
3 years 11 months ago
kindness
Trisk
Geezer
3 years 11 months ago
Sooooo good!...
This one hits the spot! ~ Geez.
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lovedly
3 years 11 months ago
THANKS GEE
ANOTHER POETRY POETESS SAID
It's abs professional my
had dog's ears
LOL