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Your Smile is Intoxicating

Your smile is exotic
it's intoxicating
it sends swift currents
down my bent spine
straightens many a thing
which at my age become
sans

Still I love to watch our smile
so very fragile
it's wild and n the forests of darkness
where there is no sun
your blushes ignite the dried up leaves
autumn is coming
I can see

will you smile with me
rather more smile
will ye

blush~ blush I can see
waters trickling

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read , and they inspire..

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lovedly

lovedly

3 years 11 months ago

THANKS GEE

ANOTHER POETRY POETESS SAID
It's abs professional my
had dog's ears
LOL