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Aug 26, 2021
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Exotic Nights
All nights want to be
ecstatic and exotic
we must undress silence
kindly enjoy this only life
let night be musically
vibrational
we are or we were born
out of the silence of night ~~~
but still laughing
shrieking
till angels fall from heaven
seeking us
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Geezer
3 years 10 months ago
I see...
the dawn a' coming,
it's coming 'round the bend
We're stuck here on the Earth
but good times are here again
Music from the angels
keeps on us on our toes
Dancing to the beat
to a tune that we all know
Sorry, just couldn't resist!
I like your poem, it gives the sense that everything isn't as bad as it might be.
~ Geez.
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lovedly
3 years 10 months ago
GEE NEVER be sorry
What comes from the inner core
depth of the heart
from whose heart other than Gee's
can it ever be an integral part
Thanks Gee after Sparrow
I love thee
May be friends as you always say
last birth we must have been
in he wilderness
where deserts must have been serene
must be rainier pastures
to have a good friend like you
one needs genes of diamonds
you know GEE
thanks to thee
Jackweb
3 years 10 months ago
Good score...
All nights want to be
ecstatic and exotic
we must undress silence
kindly enjoy this only life
let night be musically
vibrational
first, you're a poet indeed. i love the construction of the verse. Very apt! these lines above clothes the body of the poem with energy and truly they are well chosen. Its just a sweet verse in my eyes. Good write up Lovedly
lovedly
3 years 10 months ago
Grateful for
Grateful for
the score
thanks I see you have come after a very long break
Jack
Jackweb
3 years 10 months ago
O yes..things beyond my power
O yes..things beyond my power here in Nigeria. Its not an easy road at all. But thank God he is impossibility specialist. i'm glad the neopoet family is greatly waxing strong.
lovedly
3 years 10 months ago
believe in neos
all are real
all else is imagery
I don't subscribe to any
you may continue
lovedly
3 years 10 months ago
excerpts selected
which ones GEE AND MARK