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Aug 28, 2021
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My best friend
Walking
Talking
Laughing
Shouting
Pranking
Gone
Siting
Silent
Frowning
Whispering
Working
Sickness
People freaking
People leaving
Lonely ness
Conspiracy
Protesting
Vaccines
Injections
Confusion
Government
Labour
prime minster
Name
banned
Household
Lockdown
Restricted
Driving
September
Arguing
No silence
Trying
Thinking
School work
Ideas
Careers
Navy
Fitness
Happy
Conspiracy
Parents
puppet
Jacinda
Labour
Government
New Zealand
Entire
world
brain
explosion
from
seams
Can’t handle
Lonely ness
Ideas
Reality
Or just inside my brain
Bye
Friend
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Direction:
What did you think of my title?
How was my language use?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Is the internal logic consistent?
Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
c lynn brooks
3 years 10 months ago
some
poetic form would be nice rather than a list
Obadiah Grey
3 years 10 months ago
Found this interesting, in
Found this interesting, in that the lack of format and punctuation made me want to find a rhythm and some sort of a meaning to the piece,,,,,,, Idid, and I like it.
Hope you post a little more, Obi.