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lovedly

Sep 06, 2021 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Your Love

Your love
I seek
you are mine
within reach
searching you
on every beach
come love me
I'm within reach''

SEARCHING INSTEAD OF SEEKING HOWZ IT NOW STAN AND GEE

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read , and they inspire..

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Comments

3 years 10 months ago

I'll have to...

think on it, it's too early to get philosophical! ~ Geez.
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3 years 10 months ago

ok

keep clicking ur CLOCK
GEE

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3 years 10 months ago

hi loved

Line 5 is kinda off to me. Maybe change search to seeking? Otherwise enjoyable

3 years 10 months ago

Scribbler hi

did you review

3 years 10 months ago

I guess...

there is nothing philosophical about it after-all. You're just a horny old goat! Yes, trade search for seeking, feels better that way. ~ Geez.
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3 years 10 months ago

I WILL ABIDE

with you and stan coz u both are masters but give it a second thought as UNREQUITED LOVE NOT HORNY passing time composed this when I WAS what you say GEE
horror knee
yesterday I LOST MY PW today I have noted somewhere HAPPY DAY

3 years 10 months ago

Yes...

I see the unrequited love part, and yes, it sounds better. Sorry, didn't mean to be flip with my critique. Short and sweet, I see you on the beach, lounging on a blanket, sipping a cool drink with your dark shades and roaming eyes. ~ Geez.
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3 years 10 months ago

lol Gee

if only