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Sep 06, 2021
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Your Love
Your love
I seek
you are mine
within reach
searching you
on every beach
come love me
I'm within reach''
SEARCHING INSTEAD OF SEEKING HOWZ IT NOW STAN AND GEE
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Geezer
4 years 1 month ago
I'll have to...
think on it, it's too early to get philosophical! ~ Geez.
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lovedly
4 years 1 month ago
ok
keep clicking ur CLOCK
GEE
scribbler
4 years 1 month ago
hi loved
Line 5 is kinda off to me. Maybe change search to seeking? Otherwise enjoyable
lovedly
4 years 1 month ago
Scribbler hi
did you review
Geezer
4 years 1 month ago
I guess...
there is nothing philosophical about it after-all. You're just a horny old goat! Yes, trade search for seeking, feels better that way. ~ Geez.
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lovedly
4 years 1 month ago
I WILL ABIDE
with you and stan coz u both are masters but give it a second thought as UNREQUITED LOVE NOT HORNY passing time composed this when I WAS what you say GEE
horror knee
yesterday I LOST MY PW today I have noted somewhere HAPPY DAY
Geezer
4 years 1 month ago
Yes...
I see the unrequited love part, and yes, it sounds better. Sorry, didn't mean to be flip with my critique. Short and sweet, I see you on the beach, lounging on a blanket, sipping a cool drink with your dark shades and roaming eyes. ~ Geez.
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lovedly
4 years 1 month ago
lol Gee
if only