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Geezer
Geezer
Sep 14, 2021 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)
This poem is part of the challenge:

Neopoet Random Challenge 7

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Neopoet Random Challenge #7...

No! I've missed the last fuel stop!
Eager to make time, I blew it
Oh, I hope that I have enough to make it
Perhaps I will, if I drive steady
Okay, just take it slow
Easy does it, ignore
Those butterflies in my stomach
Dot the I's
Call on your inner reserves
Omit any doubts and
Make sure the desert doesn't get you

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Direction: What did you think of my title?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Is the internal logic consistent?

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - draft

About the Author

Region, Country: New York State - USA, USA

Favorite Poets: Poe, Emily Dickenson, Robert Frost, Shakespeare, and many of the poets here at Neopoet.

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Geezer

Geezer

3 years 9 months ago

Thank you...

I love doing these challenges, because they challenge me! ~ Geezer.
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Geezer

Geezer

3 years 8 months ago

How nice to see you...

I guess, what I meant, was to try and think of anything that might help the situation. Do I remember how many MPG I get with this car, do I remember how far have I come, etc. Glad that the panic came through! Thanks for stopping by. ~ Geez.
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