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Mar 19, 2011
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Hellion
Arrogant little freak
Assassin in the undergrowth
Marauder, ravaging my soul
Bandit, betrayer
Hellion, destroyer
Instigator of my ruin
Primordial, sensibility
Driving me insane
Slashing at my psyche
But I’m feisty and prepared
A quarrelsome girl
I’ll fight you tooth and claw
Won’t take your shit, anymore
I’m ornery and battle worn
A fractious little madam
I’ll fight you tooth and nail
Your distorted lies, I will unveil
On the surface a battler
Standing guard by my garrison
Protecting my vulnerabilities
Radical emotions
Beating me to a pulp
Scorching to the core
Primordial, sensibility
Driving me insane
Slashing at my psyche
(outro)
But I'm feisty, ornery and quarrelsome
Battle worn, prepared and fractious
I'll fight you tooth, nail and claw
Won't take shit from you, anymore
About This Poem
Last Few Words: Thank you to Hooded Stranger, for all his help with this song.
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Candlewitch
14 years 4 months ago
Dear Lou,
I really like:
But I’m feisty and prepared
A quarrelsome girl
I’ll fight you tooth and claw
Won’t take your shit, anymore
I’m ornery and battle worn
A fractious little madam
I’ll fight you tooth and nail
Your distorted lies, I will unveil
Great song. I love it! I have no suggestions, only appreciation for the work!
love, Cat
lou
14 years 4 months ago
Cat
Thank you , Dan played a big part in putting these lyrics together.
love Lou
ziggy
14 years 3 months ago
hi louise
Arrogant little freak
Assassin in the undergrowth
Marauder, ravaging my soul
Bandit, betrayer
Hellion, destroyer
Instigator of my ruin" good lines these like them indeed,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
interesting title , nothing to crit good job deserves more comments ,,,,,,,,,,,ziggy
lou
14 years 3 months ago
Hi Zigs
Thanks bud, I am pleased that you found it , I thought it was another poem that was gonna be ignored , was thinking of giving up on this site, thanks for restoring my faith.
Love Louise xx
magics02
14 years 3 months ago
You go gal
Wow Lou I know this one felt good to write for I felt it and wish I could hear it now. I like that part of fight you tooth and nail. You put up a good glove in this one. Happy to read you once again
Mona
xox
lou
14 years 3 months ago
Mona
Thanks
Lou