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Oct 06, 2021
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I AM - experimental poetry series (II)
PART TWO
I AM
an annex
a shaft
a shank
a shack
a hoard
a pen
a pencil
some pages
some written pages from past
a blast
summer
bummer
a field lit with pigeon holes
moles
a beautiful morning
morning in June
an act of defiance
a planet
a tide
a wave
the waves
the waves that are crashing
the waves that are breaking
inside your soul.
About This Poem
Last Few Words: This is the second part of the experimental poetic writing project of "I AM".
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft
Comments
Geezer
3 years 9 months ago
Stream of thought...
that is made here, is not really so new, but I see you are having fun with it and who knows? Maybe it will lead to things that you are not aware of at the moment. Keep writing and see where it takes you. ~ Geezer.
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arjiris.f.
3 years 9 months ago
Yes, it is a kind of stream
Yes, it is a kind of stream of conscious writing and actually this is the second part of it!. Thank you!
Obadiah Grey
3 years 9 months ago
I like that you have likened
I like that you have likened yourself to
something other than the normal Human failings.
The shat out nature of your chosen format
is a boon for the piece,
Loved it all, save the--
"waves that are crashing
the waves that are breaking"
Obi.