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Oct 23, 2021
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Time's Oblivion
Today is someone's
Birthday
a gift of a poem
of his today
Glory and Grief
are relatives
Two of my best poetry
fans and mentors
passed away in sleep
but I don't weep
glory and gory
have short lives only
I too will
a part of history be
soonly
fadingly
till such time
Abide with me
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Simon
3 years 8 months ago
Wow
Poetry is actually a sweet communicating language, that's a nice work.
I'd rather learn how to fish than to beg for one.
lovedly
3 years 8 months ago
thank you for the
wow SIMON
lovedly
3 years 8 months ago
slow response
I observe each day
Neos awake