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AUTUMN IS REAL FUN

Autumn arrives again
trees wind stripped-nudity
gals dance about a pole
shed their clothes like lifeless leaves
they show all lay beneath skin
no fruits dangling
apples and bananas
no breasts
no busts
all cast
as autumn arrived today

oldies too walk about in autumn
like me and you
dance about in the park
semi nude no hat

if trees can show
can't they
all ask me
you can't simulate trees
many autumns all have seen
naked like multi colored autumn leaves

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read , and they inspire..

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Geezer

Geezer

3 years 7 months ago

Shed...

not shred. Unless you are implying that the wind has ripped their clothes off! ~ Geez.
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Geezer

Geezer

3 years 7 months ago

Shred was not...

corrected! Sometimes we just don't get read! I read it! ~ Geez.
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scribbler

3 years 7 months ago

hi loved

comparing the shedding of leaves and clothes works well here.