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Dec 01, 2021
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December’s Haiku
Sun rays freeze as snow,
lights on trees and hanging balls;
December has come.
About This Poem
Style/Type: Structured: Eastern
Review Request Direction: How does this theme appeal to you?
Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft
Comments
Geezer
3 years 7 months ago
This, to me...
is more a Western type of Haiku, it isn't a subtle turn of events, reached by almost connected thoughts; but rather a strong line of progression? However, it does the trick and is a full story. BTW. there is no punctuation in Haiku. ~ Geezer.
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