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Dec 09, 2021
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Owl Said
Owl asked "Where are you headed to young traveler?"
"To tomorrow and all that awaits me there."
Owl's eyes blinked in the slow-motion way that they will
and said "Don't hurry past the beauty among the ordinary here today,
where all you have to do is see it."
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
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Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft
Comments
Geezer
3 years 7 months ago
This is very much like...
what you might hear if you were watching a Chinese movie and listening to the wise, old, sage talking to his protege. Nice!
~Geezer.
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