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Dec 13, 2021
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WAIT FOR TOMORROW
Wait for the next hour
a new light surfaces
after this morn
as noon presides
wait we twilight
a new night
life moves on
till the new twilight
a newer dawn
a fresher is born
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Jackweb
3 years 7 months ago
I love the title of the poem.
Very instructive, 'wait for tomorrow'.
Someone here being reprooved. Each day births new morning in our life. If life Or nature can't deliver today tomorrow is another brand new day we can achieve our goal.
Therefore patience is a virtue. We must adhere the art of waiting no matter how we want it fast.
Beautiful poem garnished with simplicity.
Bravo Lovedly!
lovedly
3 years 7 months ago
Beautiful poem garnished with simplicity.
When one is simple
like swards beautify the earth
so should men and women last
as simple ones
to be well understood
no blah blah blaaa
thanks poet
Jackweb
3 years 7 months ago
Wait for tomorrow
I really enjoyed the concision of the poem.
lovedly
3 years 7 months ago
concision ????of the poem
means
Jackweb
3 years 7 months ago
It means...
Its a writing principle of eliminating redundancy in a sentence. The poem is short. Simple!
lovedly
3 years 7 months ago
I thought you'd meant concise
google says concision is archaic as jess would say
like ere
is neither here nor there =ARCHAIC
for poetry sake
good education anyways
Jackweb
3 years 7 months ago
Furthermore...
The word 'concision' is a (noun) which implies briefness and brevity.
2. Concise too, is the same thing. But is all about the usage in a sentence.
Thanks for exploring...
lovedly
3 years 7 months ago
haapy we all must be jess is not hearing
else he'd be us tearing
our older times inners briefs he'd be
exploring these archaic guys
Triskelion
3 years 7 months ago
lovedly
when you look to the sky, what do you see?
Thomas
lovedly
3 years 7 months ago
for your
only uuuuuuuuuu eeeeeeeee lol and u ?
Triskelion
3 years 7 months ago
I see..
the top of my mast and a fire from it that tears the sky open, through which the stars tumble down. I think to myself, "how lovedly".
Thomas
lovedly
3 years 7 months ago
Thanx
Trisk happy you do read