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Kintsugi is an art

Kintsugi is the art
of mending broken pottery
with gold or silver

Japanese believe that repairing a broken vessel
is more appealing

you seem to apply this Kintsugi
as a metaphor
to unite broken hearts
if so young Aussie
you are really creative
@20
keep at it

there is no point
of being a machine gun poet like me
as Jess another Aussie
bashed me

I understood only
when poetry-wise I had been broken
time and again
makes me now more beautiful
than I originally was.

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read , and they inspire..

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Jackweb

Jackweb

3 years 6 months ago

I believe the poem,

I believe the poem, Kintsugi is the Japanese art of putting broken pottery pieces back together with gold- a metaphor for embracing your flaws and imperfections. You won't realize your full potential until you go through the tough times.

Lessons learnt in the poem:
Kintsugi teaches you that your broken places make you stronger and better than ever before. When you think you're broken, you can pick up the pieces, put back together, and learn to embrace the cracks.

lovedly

lovedly

3 years 6 months ago

very very good

many thanks as usual u lift up the human mind one like u is a rare find

Jackweb

Jackweb

3 years 6 months ago

Thanks so much Lovedly

You're very creative in writing. I so much adore your creativity. More greese to your elbow.

lovedly

lovedly

3 years 6 months ago

do give some gin and red wine

to make my creative mind fly above the sun..... in search of creation if you believe in one
none
above the natural life giver
my sun
o son

lovedly

lovedly

3 years 6 months ago

BLACK BLUE OR WHITE LABEL

Champagne is expensive but to satisfy our ego we want the most expensive and share power with none we have acquisition earned become powerful men or women creativity never shun lo here comes GREED