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arjiris.f.
Dec 31, 2021 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

ticking clocks

New Year’s Eve:
clocks come to halt
and start again.

About This Poem

Last Few Words: Happy New Year to everyone! Let’s hope that 2022 shall be the end of this awful pandemic state that we all live in, and let it be the most healthy, creative and awesome year!

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism

Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft

About the Author

Country/Region: Greece

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Comments

Jackweb

Jackweb

3 years 6 months ago

This is called tercet or triplet

A poetic unit of three lines can get your eyes glued, mind and thought to read aloud and try to unveil the entire body of a poem.

Tercet or triplet is fancy, apt and very understandable.

Geezer

Geezer

3 years 6 months ago

Nice job...

on the tercet! It gives the whole meaning to the poem! ~ Geezer.
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scribbler

3 years 6 months ago

Hmmmm....Hmmmmm......

I keep wanting to read about a pause before the clock resumes. Don't know Why but you might play around with working in a pause and see if you like it better.

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arjiris.f.

3 years 6 months ago

The halt and the restart of

The halt and the restart of the clocks on New Year’s Eve have been a kind of childhood memory or dream to me, as my grandmother used to tell it to me when she fed me hot milk. Have a nice year!