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Jan 02, 2022
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Should you forget me REFORCED EDIT
Should you forget me
Never mind
Did I ever know you
The wind takes me
here and there
where were you
CHORUS
Should you forget me
wind takes me
here and there
where were you
In search of a fresher one
than me
never mind just forget me
I shall chase another speedier wind would you care to join in the flood too
never mind we shall sing the chorus too
I and you
sorry
you and I
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Should you forget me
Never mind
Did I ever know you
The wind takes me
here and there
where were you
CHORUS
Should you forget me
wind takes me
here and there
where were you
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Triskelion
3 years 6 months ago
I'd like to see..
..another stanza ending with
"Where you are"
The wind is one of a true poet's muses. It is also my favourite way to travel.
Thomas
lovedly
3 years 6 months ago
cdn poet friend
just add on i will include not much of a musician i am
Triskelion
3 years 6 months ago
Okay
I apologize.
Thomas
lovedly
3 years 6 months ago
Thomas who
see edit as requested
lovedly
3 years 6 months ago
ok
tomorrow I will
today's one free poem
is over
ASK GEE
Why is jess controlling us still
Jackweb
3 years 6 months ago
This is enjambment
The poem has no interruptions of any punctuation mark. As I read aloud the tone in the poem drops unfinished lines. In the poem there is rhetorical question aboud. In many cases it may be intended to start a discourse, or as a means of displaying or emphasize the speaker's opinion on topic.