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lovedly
lovedly
Jan 18, 2022 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

OBVIOUS POEMATICALLY

THE Obvious O Poets

Enjoy cold Ice Cream
Ice Creams are cold
haven't heard of hot ones
yet

It's raining outside
yes but of Course
it can't rain inside

Take shelter under
A umbrella
you meant
AN,
O Poetic Fella

in Poetree
use
a leaf
be brief
leave out trees

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read , and they inspire..

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Comments

Ray Whitaker

Ray Whitaker

3 years 5 months ago

Hello Lovedly

A tounge-in-cheek piece. I wish I could write in that sort of way. I seem to be immersed in some sort of reality based work…

Ray Whitaker

Ray Whitaker

3 years 5 months ago

And yet…

Some poets seem to experience commercial success, are named poet laureates, sell out for their readings, etc. I’mnot in it for the cash, however would like to be known for my work worldwide.

I don’t measure my success in those terms, however i wouldn’t feel bad is some of those things came along for me.

I am not a “educated-in-college” poet…however have taken the time to read broadly, and attempt to understand the other poets ways. The poets I have listed on my bio page here are the ones I have found to be influential.

I will write no novels my friend…