Silliest ME

Silliest person ever born
under the fiery sun and lovely moon

I could not understand her invite
all alone when so very young

Today I weep at my folly of my failing
in not accepting what she was then offering

life lapsed into oblivion
now I realise why from the top I fall
like a senseless Niagara Fall

my life would have been
like red grapes in life's vine but
it was unimaginably silly of me

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read , and they inspire..

Comments

scribbler

3 years 5 months ago

a bit vague as to intent......or maybe I

just haven't been awake long enough lol

lovedly

3 years 5 months ago

stan you can think even when asleep

This piece speaks of school guy girl infatuation possible longer association for life missed it else we could have been a different couple for life
and sure enough a different birds pair for strife
Will this much suffice

Geezer

3 years 5 months ago

I get it...

I'm sure that many people play that game with themselves; what might have been. I have had a few of those moments myself. I guess it's a case of "Could've, would have, should have. I like this one, short, sweet and no dying! LoL
Nice job! ~ Geez.
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lovedly

3 years 5 months ago

yeah thanks

birds of a feather fling to gather
no dying GEE brother
lol

Obadiah Grey

3 years 5 months ago

I'm with you all the way with

I'm with you all the way with regard to missed 'romantic" opportunities,
always seemed to be one step behind and doing the foxtrot
whilst she was tangoing off into the distance with the splendid greasy wop,
whom, it must be said was a far better dancer than I, though,
said 'Wop" never quite mastered the Hokey Pokey like I did,
and as such, missed out on many a tangled leg.

I like this one Lovedly,
I can ( as Geezer said) see myself in it !!
well done.

Obi.

lovedly

3 years 5 months ago

OBI

YOU make me feel like a shy lady
and
why not maybe
never ask any

the sky is blue
you too
but of a different hue
wooooowhooooooooo
come and dance with me
will you too