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Feb 20, 2022
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Fear Not We All Are Mortals ......EDIT TYPO
Fear Not We All Mortals
FEAR NOT
WE ALL ARE
MORTALS
brought by pleasurable actions
of lively exciting couples
born to face similar lives controlled by
HERITAGE
ENVIRONMENT
CIRCUMSTANCE
each one has different
HEC
even twins
we are human
not blue prints
of trees
and
animals
About This Poem
Last Few Words: YES WE ALL ARE MORTALS IN QUEUE WHEN WILL GO WHO ----NEEDS TO BREAK THE Q
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Candlewitch
3 years 4 months ago
this is good...
dear friend Lovedly,
first of all, you may want to take out the second "ARE" in the title, to tidy the poem up a bit. this is the second poem that I have read this morning that is based in simple truth. both simple and to the point :) I enjoyed it very much.
*hugs, Cat