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Feb 25, 2022
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THREE P'S
There are more important issues today
to stop the world going astray
most important one is
Population
thus enhancing
Poverty
then greed of being
KING
Next you know it
what
the third P
This world is still running
we must take off our hats
Bow we must
About This Poem
Last Few Words: Populistic then humouristic
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Candlewitch
3 years 4 months ago
might the third P...
be poetry? nice job, lovedly.
*hugs, Cat
*
lovedly
3 years 4 months ago
many a choice
Cats thanks
Geezer
3 years 4 months ago
I think...
the third one is Pride! lovedly is getting better by the day! Good stuff! ~ Geez.
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lovedly
3 years 4 months ago
as Pride approaches and friends depart
Lovedly soonly has to b come an universal part
yes GEE
pride apart
Candlewitch
3 years 4 months ago
a good one,
lovedly, and it would have been obvious, if I hadn't made it more complicated than it is ;)
*hugs, Cat
lovedly
3 years 4 months ago
thanks a ton
Cats you are kind
lovedly
3 years 4 months ago
So many Pee's
could b any thanks to thee