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Mar 08, 2022
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They Glow Then Just Flow
I have been on line
all over
despite all danger
and
I have seen
many spar for a few weeks
then they have no time
for neither you Neo or Me
and flee
They take away
all Neopoet's cake
then they say
Lee you
who
Is one such a one
you
About This Poem
Last Few Words: MODERN POETS OF THEY SAY OF REPUTE
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Geezer
3 years 4 months ago
A little...
too vague for me to decipher. ~ Geez.
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Candlewitch
3 years 4 months ago
dear Lovedly,
if you are saying that there are new members who only post poems for the attention it gets them, then they run off without bothering to read other poets work or offer comment. then I really agree with you, it makes me mad and sad!
*hugs, Cat
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lovedly
3 years 4 months ago
abs right 100000000000000 percent
wonder why Gee didn't like it never mind he is Chair
has to be fair
I have been in NEO for over 14 years loved and lovedly combined
Thanks Cats for ur support
THE WHOLE TRUTH BE TOLD
Candlewitch
3 years 4 months ago
dear lovedly,
I think he might understand the poem if he read it again, looking through new eyes!
*hugs, Cat
Geezer
3 years 4 months ago
Candlewitch is right...
After her explanation, I understood it better. I agree with both of you. It's a shame, but it will happen, nothing we can do about it. Let's just continue to be welcoming and hope that people stick around long enough to get to know us. ~ Geez.
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lovedly
3 years 4 months ago
Thanks GEE
FINE THANKS WE ALL UNDERSTAND
IF SOME ONE DOES NOT COMMENT ON URS
DON'T COMMENT ON THEIRS I SUPPOSE
LOL THO