Great Longing

There's a great longing
to return back to the days
ere
when you were amidst us
now no more
yet

We shall continue to remember you
yeah you bet
time and tide never waited
for anyone as yet

So we too will be on a similar boat
you bet
but hopefully
not really as yet

About This Poem

Last Few Words: REMEMBRANCE HAS A LONG ENDING

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read , and they inspire..

Comments

Candlewitch

3 years 3 months ago

dear lovedly,

is this poem about Jess T. I miss him terribly. he was a good teacher and a very good friend. not too many people/poets understood him and his ways. I'm glad that you did.

*hugs, Cat

Candlewitch

3 years 3 months ago

CATS

Glad you liked it This was a continuation of my latest loss Thanks it could apply to jess or any of Neos we all know Thanks

Candlewitch

3 years 3 months ago

dear lovedly,

do you remember the Moonman? I always liked his poetry, too.

*hugs, Cat

lovedly

3 years 3 months ago

but didn't like my poetry
as much as
IAN ESKER AND JUDY
STILL WE can pray for them
As our own eyes dim we can no longer play in whim the stars forever stay bright whether we normal human in this mundane world stay left or right only our memories should for ever be bright like the twilight ere last night remember all bedded deep we might