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Mar 29, 2022
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BITTER SWEET
The sweet ones
who comment sweetly
are hardly any
as the world proceeds on
such beautiful ones are also gone
The hardness prevails
as all know
one day those
unwanted ones
will also go
yeah
they damn well know
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Geezer
3 years 3 months ago
Someday...
We have to believe that that someday will come. ~ Geez.
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lovedly
3 years 3 months ago
Gee
but of course as I always say
life is controlled by
GENES
ENVIRONMENT
AND
CIRCUMSTANCE
ALL IS A MATTER OF TIME
Thanks friend you r kind
Candlewitch
3 years 3 months ago
dear friend,
I wish the bad ones would get bored and leave a little bit sooner. I perceive that you feel strongly about this! I do too ;)
*hugs, Cat
lovedly
3 years 3 months ago
yes
yes
as Simon says in auditions
we need a third yes
hello Gee
yes yes yes