Kaskade

bite thick this flesh
arc bright the flash
of blade

where frost steams
beneath springs
rapture
and bird dark rain
winds cascade
life for buried seed

About This Poem

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: north ontario, CAN

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Comments

Roscoe Lane

14 years 3 months ago

I'm thinking,

I'm thinking this is rebirth we're reading about, if not still well put together.I love reading your poems , though i may not always understand. I love that line , where frost steams beneath springs rapture. Great write again. Regards Roscoe..

lou

14 years 3 months ago

Esker

I just love your use of the English language. I can find no fault.

love lou

Esker

14 years 3 months ago

loving people seems difficult

but the language is something one can
its always been a passion and its somewhat
more forgiving

Ive lived more in books then I have in life
how absurd sometimes

but Im happy with poetry
and its writes
it keeps me moving in my day
gets me away from the room
and I fall into a routine
of arriving here
and leaving