I LIVE TO SEE

JUST LET ME
B
let me not eclipse
fathomless seas
will all
ye
I still live
pardon me

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read , and they inspire..

Comments

Jackweb

3 years 3 months ago

I

will only pardon if I know your shortcomings! Would you please let it out?

Candlewitch

3 years 3 months ago

dearest friend lovedly,

what is wrong? are you all right?

*hugs, Cat

lovedly

3 years 3 months ago

I was free needn't worry

as Gee was asleep
just posted a few words
as I gassed
the market cost had RISEN* * TYPO Gee is diamond like vigilant
I saw last evening
bless all car owners
a car I have
N O N E
Thank heaven

Geezer

3 years 3 months ago

I heard that!...

I was just resting my eyes. The market cost is not ridden, [it has risen].
~ Geez.
.

lovedly

3 years 3 months ago

Gee you are entitled

what has ridden and risen
Kindly elucidate
I've been living in oblivion lately
Poet Gee you sound so softly
lol

Geezer

3 years 3 months ago

You said...

in your comment to Cat, that the market cost of gas had [ridden]. I reminded you, that the proper word was [risen]. Softly is my trademark. ~ Geez.
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lovedly

3 years 3 months ago

must have been a typo

at night I'm more blind
no sun does shine