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Apr 15, 2022
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Meeting your gaze
My eyes
meet your gaze.
Then suddenly
my mind is no longer
in a maze that murmurs
towards madness.
But is welcomed into
the opened optimistic
arms of love .
As I’m met with
you a single silken
symphonic serenade .
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Candlewitch
3 years 2 months ago
dear Edward,
could you please these two lines:(in a )(maze that murmurs) to read:
(in a maze that murmurs) I really like your poem, especially these lines:
As I’m met with
you a single silken
symphonic serenade
good work all around!
*hugs, Cat
p.s.
keep up your energy for Friday/
think happy thoughts!
Edward nigma
3 years 2 months ago
Thank you
My inspiration was
https://youtu.be/3BFhn0yqVQ8
Geezer
3 years 2 months ago
I do believe...
that this is a romantic poem! Letting a person know that you are transformed when you look into their eyes! ~ Geez.
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Edward nigma
3 years 2 months ago
It is
I’ve never been in a relationship or in love but I’m very good at expressing or writing it .
Thank you
One
3 years 2 months ago
Ed
you may have never been in love but you're filled with words that express it better than many of us who have been.
Have you ever written a co-write? I'd be honoured to work with you sometime.
regards
One.
Edward nigma
3 years 2 months ago
No I have never co written
Thank you
Candlewitch
3 years 2 months ago
dear Edward,
good morning! co-writes are easy to do...first you agree on subject matter. next you decide on who goes first. then you decide on where you do it, through private messages or e-mail, etc.
*hugs, Cat