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Apr 27, 2022
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MY BELOVED SUITCASE
Loving you has no closure
I'm captivated by your culture
And the beauty of your posture
You are the best suitcase I treasure
My love for you can not be measure
You are injected in my blood brochure
Your absence can cause blood pressure
Please! let coupled and share the future
You are my soul profile picture
The dearest and the warm temperature
That I venture to cuddle with pleasure
When the coldness of the world lecture
Come hold my hand let go for adventure
To explore and enjoy the love of nature
With it all great and lovely physical feature
That are beautify by the green pasture
©NYOK MAKER MARENG
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Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Ray Whitaker
3 years 2 months ago
Welcome to our website!
I am looking forward to reading more of your work.
I find it difficult to imagine writing in a different language and then translating to this site's mother tongue, English.
Nyok Maker Mareng
3 years 2 months ago
Thank you
Candlewitch
3 years 2 months ago
hello, nice to meet you!
I found your gentle humor refreshing. I liked these lines:
Come hold my hand let go for adventure
To explore and enjoy the love of nature
With it all great and lovely physical feature
That are beautify by the green pasture
*hugs, Cat
Nyok Maker Mareng
3 years 2 months ago
Wow
it's my humbleness to hear about your compliment and mettle